Friday, March 16, 2007

 
MVI_3928



MVI_3929_vanessa

Comments:
I think Vanessa did well at her speech of introduction. First of all, her voice was her biggest advantage of speech. It was very pleasing to the audience’s ear and controlled suitably. Furthermore, I think her content of the speech was adapted to the occasion and the information was also related to the audience. Besides, she successfully established a welcoming climate that increase the speaker’s credibility and add the audience’s curiosity. However, there is one thing I think it can give to Vanessa to improve next time. Maybe it is because she was nervous when she made the speech, she did some unnecessary body language, and for instance she swung from the right hand side to the left hand side. I think she can avoid keeping this unnecessary body language. Otherwise, it was a good presentation.
 
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