speech2006

I loved the way you kicked off your presentation. However, there were some aspects of your presentation that need enhancement.

Pronunciation of words you need to watch out for:

graduation
http://m-w.com/dictionary/graduation

entrepreneur
http://m-w.com/dictionary/entrepreneur

employees
http://m-w.com/dictionary/employees

famous
http://m-w.com/dictionary/famous

http://m-w.com/dictionary/will
 

In Vicky's presentation, she was always with smile and she represented fluently. Maybe it is her fist time to speech in public,(because she just trasfered to Wenzao this semester) she is a little nervous. But at the beginning, she mentioned our graduate ceremony. In the end, she remembered to introduce her speaker's name. I think those are great.